some progress being made

he (John Howarth that is) has made a few corrections, you can see his "corrected" post here. Not bad so far John, but could do better. Thanks for paying attention and incorporating my corrections. I notice that as well as doing a a proper translation from Klingon instead of relying on Google Translate he has decided to name the others on the candidate list. Who advised him to do so, I wonder? Is this the new inclusive Howarth? I'd be surprised. Sort yourselves out boys, you'll never get elected this way.